Is this understandable at all?

[k_a_t_z]

I care. In lonely nights and cursed light of day
As acid sun grows dim cooled by declining year
Besieged by hosts of eyes how little I can say
I care
No pain on earth is able to give me such a scare
As one of seeing your face forever turned away
And spying bitter tears in your reproachful stare
I wait
In chains of icy moons and chilling autumn rain
Unable to wipe your fears or even just be there
What can I say aloud apart from dumb and plain
I care

Comments

[lolaley]

in what sense?

[k_a_t_z]

in the sense of English grammar :)

[twistedchick]

I like this.

[k_a_t_z]

thanks a lot :)

[sova_spliu]

Like people which care for smth:)

[k_a_t_z]

me too :)

[tey]

It is full of such amazing images, like a picture with several layers!

And nice to meet you:)

[k_a_t_z]

I'm happy too, thank you very much! :)

[gingerbeau]

It is very sincere, I like it a lot!

[k_a_t_z]

Thanks a lot!

[cesy]

I like this.

And hi!

[k_a_t_z]

Hi! Nice to meet you. And many thanks :)

[snowynight]

I really like the images in the poem. Lovely.

[lanterne_rouee]

this is beautiful. :)

[k_a_t_z]

thanks a lot :)