http://pitirimsorokin.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] pitirimsorokin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_t_z 2010-01-25 06:13 am (UTC)

Пардон за откровенность, но как-то Вас уносит в сторону красивости, выспренности в духе русской поэтической традиции... тогда как поэтика оригинала - специфически минималистская, сдержанная. Зачем "горний сад"? когда можно просто "купол неба"
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