http://ogionthesilent.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ogionthesilent.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_t_z 2008-10-23 09:16 am (UTC)

На мой неискушенный взгляд, переделывать не стоит. Язык хороший, читается легко. Интрига есть, идея интересная ) В общем, большой респект =) Снимаю шляпу
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